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This Is What You Did by ~Lament-Life:iconLament-Life:

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Beat Me;
Break Me;
Throw Me Around.
I'm Stronger Than They Say.
I'm Stronger Than They Know.
I'm Telling You I Can Take The Pain.
There's Always Been Worse.

I Don't Live A Perfect Life.
I'm Not Who You Say I Am.
Stop Assuming.
Stop Telling Everyone Lies.
Do You Think You're Cool For It?
Do You Think You'll Gain Friends?
I Hope You Choke.

You Never Meant Much To Me,
As I Never Meant Much To You.
I Hope You Learned Something,
Because I Did.
I Learned Not To Trust People.
I learned To Be Afraid Of Relationships.
This Is What You Did.

Always Remember;
You. Ruined. Me.
©2006-2010 ~Lament-Life
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Author's Comments

Written About *Ahem* Need I Say It? An Ex-Boyfriend And A Past Experience. It Just Came Out While I Was Doing An English Paper.

Enjoy

-L'Ange

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!j4d Sep 4, 2006, 10:34:40 PM
nice, i like the flow, and i know how you feel, guys can be real horrible sometimes >< us girls shall just have to stick together eh? lol

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<3 Yeah we bleed just to know were alive <3
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~taye Sep 4, 2006, 10:46:38 PM
Wow. I like it a lot. It reminds me of my ex boyfriend, Jessy.

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It's the new phase, new wave,
Dance craze, anyways,
It's still rock and roll to me.
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~Lament-Life Sep 5, 2006, 4:29:13 AM
Thanks =]. I'm Sorry It Reminds You Of Him. That Can't Be Pleasent.

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To The End Of The Day We Go, As The Sun Drops From A Golden Hue To Being Navy Blue.

I'm Stuck In Unforgiving Darkness
And I Could Really Use Your Light
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~Lament-Life Sep 5, 2006, 4:29:50 AM
Thank You. Chyeahhhhhh We Gotta Stick Together :lol:=P

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To The End Of The Day We Go, As The Sun Drops From A Golden Hue To Being Navy Blue.

I'm Stuck In Unforgiving Darkness
And I Could Really Use Your Light
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~Stile13756 Sep 5, 2006, 7:54:41 AM
well id better make my comment before the critics come. this poem shows alot of emotion it has a good flow and it expresses something that hurt you along time ago, its a style of writeing emotional poets like myself use, avoiding telling what really happened and just expressing emotions. alot of critics like more imagery and rhyme however they dont always see what us poets really see, the magic and forgiving power of poetry, this poem is a great one by my standards i havent seen an emotional poet like myself for a while. bravo.
~Stile

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only on the day you can fool a fool is the day you are truely a fool
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~Lament-Life Sep 5, 2006, 11:17:37 AM
Thank You For The Comment/Critque =]. I Appreciate It. I Hate Rhyming Poetry. I Say That If You Don't Have To, Don't. Exactly Though. If You're Expressing And Emotion, Why Do You Need Imagery? I Mean You Can Sure Put Similes And Metaphors In There But I Just Don't See The Point. Thank You For Favouriting :heart: =]

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To The End Of The Day We Go, As The Sun Drops From A Golden Hue To Being Navy Blue.

I'm Stuck In Unforgiving Darkness
And I Could Really Use Your Light
:iconj4d:
!j4d Sep 5, 2006, 11:37:39 AM
:)

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<3 Yeah we bleed just to know were alive <3
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~Lament-Life Sep 5, 2006, 12:59:14 PM
=]]]

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To The End Of The Day We Go, As The Sun Drops From A Golden Hue To Being Navy Blue.

I'm Stuck In Unforgiving Darkness
And I Could Really Use Your Light
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~Toric12 Sep 5, 2006, 1:40:38 PM
Well...It is very good, it does have a lot of emotion in it. It kind of reminds me of my past as well. However if you tell me where the fool is who hurt you then :chainsaw: :mwahaha:

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"Expect nothing, Prepare for Everything. Everything happens for a reason."

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